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Enter the Hero 4 by BrattyBen Enter the Hero 4 by BrattyBen
Here is another update. I added some more elements to help sell the environment, and changed some of the shadows.
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hollowdeathwish Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
Just wow! I'm genuinely impressed with you!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
Thanks.
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mitofox Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this one a lot! The contrast is balanced and I love the composition.
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
Thanks, man. You know what they say, "third time's a charm!"
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AngelCrusher Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008  Professional Filmographer
yeh, this one works great man. dont get the scary batman intimidation thing on his entry, but he seems more neutral and approachable, so whether thats good in this scene is the thing. I noticed the layout had him kinda in shadow, just like a silhouette as he was at the desk...so really they darker image with bats head blacked out worked better. this could still work though, because it kinda re-establishes batman as being a dark character in that panel.
But really, if I was reading this in a comic, i wouldnt give it a second thought, so dont worry too much.
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
Thanks for the comments. I really tried hard to get that 'classic' look, and then in the next panel I went for the mysterious.

I appreciate all the help.
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mattcrap Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
holy CRAP of an improvement.
really solid movement/pose dude
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
Thanks so much, man! I really was happy with the final result. It looks classic, but, still seems a bit modern.
I'm glad I had so many supportive people helping me out;)
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anjinanhut Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
wooozzaaa!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks for all your suggestions man. It really helped me out alot!!
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scottygod Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
That's it!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
"nailed it!!"

lol. Thanks man!
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wheels9696 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Looking good man...This is a very good angle for what you are trying to achieve.
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks. I think so too!
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captblitzdawg Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Like this shot- the added shadows really help it out. I was thinking last night, it might even be cool to have him in the corner of the room and just step out of the shadow- he had been there the whole time! Great work, love your style on the bat!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks, man!!
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Qurious Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Plus I like the cape in the wind out the window. Gives alot of movement!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks. I had many comments about getting that cape right.
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Qurious Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Like the changes. I have to get to drawing!!!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks, and get to it man!
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MangaAngel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
yay for fine details!!!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
You know it brutha!
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Commisioner grodon's office looks really rundown...
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Well, my feeling is that since the GCPD is full of graft and cops on the take, they probably wouldn't be putting too much money into the department. And since Gordon probably doesn't have alot of friends there, they gave him the crappy office.

I think it fits his character, because he's a little worse for wear himself.
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Okay.
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razor-rabbit Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Zang! looks great
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks!
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