yeh, this one works great man. dont get the scary batman intimidation thing on his entry, but he seems more neutral and approachable, so whether thats good in this scene is the thing. I noticed the layout had him kinda in shadow, just like a silhouette as he was at the desk...so really they darker image with bats head blacked out worked better. this could still work though, because it kinda re-establishes batman as being a dark character in that panel. But really, if I was reading this in a comic, i wouldnt give it a second thought, so dont worry too much.