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Enter the Hero by BrattyBen Enter the Hero by BrattyBen
Here is the panel from the next page. It's not a full half splash like I wanted (it would have totally limited the storytelling), but, I got it as a quarter panel bleeding off the page.

Let me know how I can spruce it up. It's lacking a bit of something.
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dan-sch Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Truth be told, I like this one best. The other two -- while sweet as hell -- are kind of generic Batman-coming-in-through-the-window poses. With this one, we see him from Gordon and Bullock's perspective, making him seem a bit more... real, I guess? Or maybe, more like an expert who consults with the police than an demigodlike being who blesses the police with his genius. Lately, I've been preferring the former, and thus I prefer this one.

But again... the others rock ass.
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thanks, man. I'm not sure which one to go with. I like this one more because of the drawing itself, but, I'd really need to punch up the background a bit. It's a bit too one perspective for me.
I'm at a loss....
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WonderDookie Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You might make the angle a little lower if you're trying to make his entrance more dramatic. I guess it just sort of depends on the manner of his entrance.
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
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I think this is better. What do you think?
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
Yeah. I think you're right. I'd hate to redraw it. But, hell. I got nothing better to do. Thanks again!
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Number-Ron Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
this is great, you do a really great job, i'd the foot seems a little big to me, but im not good with these things so i don't know haha. besides that everything is solid, great posing. that clenched fist with that expression, i'm intimidated by your drawing!

BUT I MUST SAY, i don't like this. we aren't meant to see batman crawl through the window, he just appears with the window open haha :]
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
That's true. I just think that I'd shit my pants if I saw a guy like that sitting in the window. Like I just caught him in mid entrance. Spooky.

Thanks for the comments. The foot may seem a little big, because the 'camera' is slightly below him, so it's a kind of perspective thing. To make him seem a bit bigger. Now that I think about it, I could've done it a different way, from a more extreme angle. Hmm...but I really like the drawing here. Conundrum.
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MangaAngel Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
this is big!... lacks text!
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BrattyBen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
It's kinda big. Not too big. And I'm not putting any text in here. I'll leave that for a writer:)
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MangaAngel Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
that was saying... it don't need no Fing thing added...
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